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Hollow
Contributed by
bobotheclown
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Friday, 1st August 2003 @ 08:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Walls, streaked with blood and sweat
Stain my room like a nightmare
Fresh blood trickles down
I can almost taste it the air is so rank
My eyes hollow and vacant
Stare, uncaring, yet fixated
My body is raw and red,
But these drugs turn the pain to ecstacy,
And the blood pours from me
Striving to mend me with some sense of wholeness
It never stops and I am never whole
Yearning to be complete
I bash my walls releasing my frustration,
But leave only a bloodied handprint
I am stuck here, pleading, to be released,
But I trapped myself here and now I am stuck
The air is filled with the stench of blood
And like a shark I am driven on
How cruel, how beautiful, how unfulfilling
Slashing away to attain my prize
That some people know as DEATH
I'm hollow, I need to be whole
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2003-08-01 08:05:00]
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Re: Hollow
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by garyh on
Friday, 1st August 2003 @ 08:56:21 AM AEST
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| good write... its a great way to express what you are feeling through your poetry.. im glad its somewhat of a way for you to escape some of your feeling... keep writing |
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Re: Hollow
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by karoody on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 01:59:50 AM AEST
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you know, you shouldn't write stuff that makes girls cry...lol...i enjoyed this one...
kara |
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