|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Without You
Contributed by
thatabbygirl
on
Thursday, 31st July 2003 @ 10:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
|
I'm so confused
Feel like I'm dying inside
My stomach tied in knots
My heart torn in two
Half of me wants to give in to you
Give in to what my heart longs for, a second chance
But the other half holds back
Knowing it can never be--again.
Never be what I want it to be
What I yearn for, what I desire
For you and I are too different
Two halves that will never make a whole
Only a hole in my heart.
Must I forever ache inside,
Knowing this is how it's meant to be?
I know the answer's no,
So I cry a little
And wait for the sun to come up
Because it always does
And I live yet another day without you--
The way it has to be.
Copyright ©
thatabbygirl
... [
2003-07-31 22:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Without You
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Friday, 1st August 2003 @ 03:06:08 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Really good job.... love the lines :
Two halves that will never make a whole
Only a hole in my heart.
I really feel the passion and sadness
that this love has brought you.
Your very creative.... don't stop writting. |
|
|
Re: Without You
(User Rating: 1 )
by squeesh on
Friday, 1st August 2003 @ 04:04:56 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
That's a really cute poem. Just hang in there and never let those memories of the great times you had with that person fade away. They'll always be in your heart and that's what counts.
~squeesh |
|
|
Re: Without You
(User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on
Friday, 1st August 2003 @ 06:41:47 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This is so sad, it really touched me. Especially the end. Wonderful job, you have a way with words.
~ Moonlit |
|
|
Re: Without You
(User Rating: 1 )
by garyh on
Friday, 1st August 2003 @ 08:25:22 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| nice write.. you seem to have a good outlook on things and look for the best... very good.. i would say more but im tired.. sorry |
|
|
Re: Without You
(User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on
Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 02:08:10 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Hey I like this and I want you to keep it up |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
