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Terrible Silence
Contributed by
exiled
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Thursday, 31st July 2003 @ 07:05:00 PM in AEST
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"Terrible Silence"
I need you close to sing
it's the same beginning
it's the same old same old song
nothing has changed
you are so far away
what could i do without your face
i remember the way you used to taste
if only i could go back to those days
with your silky skin and the way i could make your legs shake
but i sit up and watch the sun rise today
withness the beauty flourish and fade
watch as the mezmerising red
slowly turns to grey
and everything beautiful now decays without your face
shielded by my curse
no one can see whats wrong with me
filled with so much hate
so much pain
why did things happen this way
deep down inside i feel the scream
a terrible silence keeps it this way
i need you close to sing
it the same beginning
its the same old same old song
nothing has changed
no matter where it stops
i realize who we are
these shattered pieces cut into my hands
leaving me broken
with never-ending scars
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Re: Terrible Silence
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 1st August 2003 @ 12:52:47 AM AEST
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| mmm sam this is goooood:) hugs n' love and smile, nessa |
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Re: Terrible Silence
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by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Friday, 1st August 2003 @ 03:39:29 AM AEST
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| Your right... I think people will like it too.... this poem is very creative, and very personal at the same time....there is alot of experiance in these words.... wisdom I have yet to learn, emotions I have yet to taste. All I can say is you are forever as young as you want to be in your heart... what you see, is not always what is in front of you. I'm glad you let this one slip out onto paper... bless you for sharing such personal emotions. |
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Re: Terrible Silence
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by venkat on
Friday, 1st August 2003 @ 07:48:31 AM AEST
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Wow! this is really beautiful and heart touching..and i could feel the pain also...
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Re: Terrible Silence
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by Crow on
Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 04:22:47 PM AEST
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| i do like this, a little sad but my kind of read. Crow |
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Re: Terrible Silence
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by Saira on
Monday, 1st September 2003 @ 04:27:38 PM AEST
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This is an incredibly good write. Loved it!
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