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clear eyes light

Contributed by wassim on Thursday, 31st July 2003 @ 05:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

what clear eyes light
make me deep and out of sight
to the power of love i fight
getting beated i might
your not suffering it every day and night
you screamed at my face"take a hight"

you think i don't have any feeling
feeling so cold and hard breathing
like a soken ship crashed by my heart beating
only the tears i taste and there's nothing
feeling the love hunger and nothing eating

only the pain from the air to the heart
it totaly falled apart
i swear i loved you from the start
before we meat you where very smart

that you chosed me as a sol mate
using me like a bait
you know that's what i really hate
eveng with the rain it was to you very late

every excuse i tryed
true emotions never lied
to your heart this feeling i couldin't denied
feeling like the last days almost died
this love you ript off and eveng buyed

another guy with muscles
to you he was perfect unlike the others
outside beauty only about you didin't bothers
using you he neeted some knuckles
a total discrise to all the lovers

hope he will use you more
then you used me slamed at my face the door
eveng that my beauty was poor
you won't meat a guy like me netted for
the inside part at each step at your floor

Copyright © wassim ... [ 2003-07-31 05:05:00]
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Re: clear eyes light (User Rating: 1 )
by Asatru on Thursday, 31st July 2003 @ 05:17:07 AM AEST
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Your poem is really good, I liked it a lot. Kinda sounds like a good song, I dunno...

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