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Your Beauty
Contributed by
garyh
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Wednesday, 30th July 2003 @ 01:05:00 PM in AEST
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Your short blonde hair
The way it floats in the air
Your smile
And the way it makes me feel agile
Your luscious lips
And I can't forget those wonderful hips
Your eyes are so cute
I don't think anyone would dispute
Your cheerful cheeks
Make me where I can't even speak
Your beauty
Is truly like no other
That's why I want you
And no other
Copyright ©
garyh
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2003-07-30 13:05:00]
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Re: Your Beauty
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by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Monday, 18th August 2003 @ 03:28:44 AM AEST
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| Lust... what lovely thing it can be. This poem reminded me of a high school crush, and how it made my day just to see them, even though they didn't know I existed. great write. |
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Re: Your Beauty
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by CrimsonTearz on
Saturday, 30th August 2003 @ 11:38:27 PM AEST
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| good poem.. |
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Re: Your Beauty
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by krismisevski on
Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 02:26:20 AM AEST
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| This poem reminded me of an elementary school crush. There's nothing wrong with being honest, but there are so many cliches in this, it seems like you found a website, posted a poem, and told the girl about it just to impress her. Seems like a rip off to me, but I hope it worked out for you. |
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Re: Your Beauty
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by garyh on
Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 02:24:50 PM AEST
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| personally i have never heard any of these so called "cliche" statements before... so i don't know how i could use them ;) and also the only websites that this poem is on is mine and this site. it is copyrighted by me |
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