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At the edge of emptiness
Contributed by
cant-skate
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Wednesday, 30th July 2003 @ 04:35:00 AM in AEST
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Beneath the moon thy flesh bedevils me
Souls enthroned and I m thy blasphemy
Tears of dawn bleeding like thee tasting like wine
And thirsting for me…
You had the pride of life,
You had the strength of dignity
But u turned my love away,
Yet our love never dies beneath
The howling tears
But at the end
Thy flame will kiss my love away
When u burn in hell
So many worlds away!
The moon has been filled with darkness
And the flowers cry on your madness
For I am the shadow that comes from your pain
As I drift away and bleed in your veins!
Coz I m the hand that struck your face
The hand that struck your heart
The fear that made you lonely
The tears that made you afraid!!!!!
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2003-07-30 04:35:00]
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Re: At the edge of emptiness
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by S_K_Williamson on
Wednesday, 30th July 2003 @ 12:23:41 PM AEST
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Powerful...and so much anger. This is the second poem of abuse I have read on this site today. There are so many kinds of abuse...so many sides to it.
I submitted a poem on it myself this morning...it is called If Only...
This is another great write my friend,
Sharon;) |
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Re: At the edge of emptiness
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by S_K_Williamson on
Wednesday, 30th July 2003 @ 12:25:34 PM AEST
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Powerful...and so much anger. This is the second poem of abuse I have read on this site today. There are so many kinds of abuse...so many sides to it.
I submitted a poem on it myself this morning...it is called If Only...
This is another great write my friend,
Sharon;) |
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Re: At the edge of emptiness
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by cant-skate on
Wednesday, 30th July 2003 @ 02:59:07 PM AEST
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| Heheheh ! anger ! is a strengh ! anyway i ll read ur poem ! take care |
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Re: At the edge of emptiness
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 31st July 2003 @ 06:33:36 PM AEST
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This was great the bluntness of the poem shocked me. The last stanza I loved. This was a great poem and I don't know what to say besides that.
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Re: At the edge of emptiness
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by jaeann on
Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 03:17:03 AM AEST
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| this is really good.....very angry....the other side of the fist doesn't feel any better..... |
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