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one heart we hold
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Wednesday, 30th July 2003 @ 01:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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in each others hands we hold one heart
loved and cared for whislt apart
soon the day will come to be
each in the others eyes to see
the love therein'
then we begin
upon our clocks the seconds tick
when one has sun, the other; night thick
and as the world turns round and round
we cherish our time; this love we've found
shining of the stars the same
hearts each beat the others name
he whispers sweetly what i am dreaming
in my heart are wishes happily beaming
we answer before the other even asks
and in this love we caringly bask
this particular state in which we reside
is where our loves heart lives inside
our minds and souls have become one
within' our heart there shines the sun
this heart right here; she is yours
she floats on breezes to your shores
often the exact same thoughts we think
transmitting and joining; we are linked
our hearts they need no maritime chart
we two are one; this beating heart
in each others hands one heart we hold
loves caring sweetness now be told
yes, soon the day will come to be, in
each the others arms; loves devotees
melt warmth of skin
the love herein'
each other's sunshine after rain
°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*
Copyright ©
ladyfawn
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Re: one heart we hold
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by PoloRM on
Wednesday, 30th July 2003 @ 01:15:58 AM AEST
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It's a lovely poem that I read
And I fell for all you said.
Hope on you love always shine
Your poem is a bit beyond devine. |
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Re: one heart we hold
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by The_Phantom on
Wednesday, 30th July 2003 @ 01:56:56 AM AEST
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Master poet, your words are like a maze, they get me lost, but in those words I find my way,.
I have been inspired, thank you my dear ladyfawn.
The Phantom |
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Re: one heart we hold
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 30th July 2003 @ 02:19:46 AM AEST
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simply beautiful..especially these lines:
"our minds and souls have become one
within' our heart there shines the sun"........
"our hearts they need no maritime chart
we two are one; this beating heart".........
..thank you Nessa for sharing this beautiful poem.
venkat
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Re: one heart we hold
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by S_K_Williamson on
Wednesday, 30th July 2003 @ 02:48:40 AM AEST
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My friend! When you are called a master poet......soo true. Your words hold such beauty. I loved reading this.
Excellent write my friend,
Sharon;) |
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Re: one heart we hold
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by S_K_Williamson on
Wednesday, 30th July 2003 @ 02:56:07 AM AEST
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| wow!!!!!! I meant to give you a rave review....but did not mean to post this many comments...lol. This is a system glitch...lol. Anyway....great job....as you can see. |
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Re: one heart we hold
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 30th July 2003 @ 04:38:36 AM AEST
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Wow Nessa, Another truely beautiful poem...too sweet for words, so yes, yet again, you've left me speechless.
Love 'n Hugs
-Becca |
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Re: one heart we hold
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 30th July 2003 @ 10:11:10 AM AEST
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| Hope shines through these words ... fresh and lovely ... I know in my heart you'll find happiness ... Jan |
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Re: one heart we hold
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 30th July 2003 @ 11:25:03 AM AEST
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The beauty and happoness of your love shines on this screen and the words of this lovely poem.Much happiness to you friend.
michelle |
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Re: one heart we hold
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by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 30th July 2003 @ 03:16:02 PM AEST
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Nessa this poem has the essence of true love in it.
My wife and I have been together 50 yrs and it is amazing the number of times we both start to say almost the same thng. |
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Re: one heart we hold
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 30th July 2003 @ 07:45:03 PM AEST
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Soooooooo beautiful!! Somebody's smitten! ;) Hehehe....
~ Moonlit |
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Re: one heart we hold
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by LovingWhispers on
Thursday, 31st July 2003 @ 01:16:18 AM AEST
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You may be still sitting there staring off into space and walking around in a daze...Yet the beauty in which you weave your words,shows love's so many wonderful ways.
LOL..I KNOW you're off in your own world right now..dreaming of your sweetheart,so when you get the chance to fully take this comment in..Know how much I adored it in all its magic. :) xxx(((huggers))) *she's got it bad* lol |
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Re: one heart we hold
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by Bongo on
Thursday, 31st July 2003 @ 03:05:19 PM AEST
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Behind or in front, now i'm getting dizzy
No, remember, it's the world that is spinning
Yes,our love is not tizzy
Here soon, to make a beginning.
Ness,
When you make the music
then i'm not elusive.
x x x x x x x x x x x x x |
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Re: one heart we hold
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by exiled on
Friday, 1st August 2003 @ 12:02:45 AM AEST
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Ness, Absolutely Beautiful. I really loved this please don't ever stop giving us your words.
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Re: one heart we hold
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by xxmonstahxx on
Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 01:43:29 AM AEST
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| you write so beautifully... |
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Re: one heart we hold
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by Merry on
Thursday, 28th August 2003 @ 05:55:56 PM AEST
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beautiful love poem
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Re: one heart we hold
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 08:00:26 PM AEST
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Lovely, romantic, wistful and filled with longing.
One of your best.
I suddenly want to be in love to just to read this poem to someone!
Kie |
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