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Scared
Contributed by
stonedraider23
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Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 07:05:00 PM in AEST
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I woke up with tears in my eyes
I felt something deep inside
Confused and lost
Not knowing where I was
For the second time in my life
I was scared
I tried to push it aside
I just couldnt let go
I couldnt hide
The fear inside rose slow
I was not alone
I felt alot of pain and sadness
As tears rolled off my face
I wondered
Has my time come?
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Re: Scared
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 07:18:30 PM AEST
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| awww! i was going to say "theres nothing to fear but fear itself"..........but; i will send you a big hugg instead!! love nessa |
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Re: Scared
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by Daniel on
Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 07:29:54 PM AEST
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| goodness, this is a familiar time of life. i hope you don't stay in this particular spot forever... that would be a bad bad thing... nice write here! kudos! ;0) -daniel |
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Re: Scared
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by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 08:18:32 PM AEST
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This has such a unique feel to it... gentle, soft, but full of pain. You've got me in a mood now, lol. Excellently written!
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Scared
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by vincy on
Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 08:51:33 PM AEST
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sounds honest and well expressed
most of us touch this point at times.
My tip is; if your time has come
"fear", would be the worst way to depart
you knever know what's on the other side,
you want to go with a smile when the time comes. |
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Re: Scared
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by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 30th July 2003 @ 08:55:34 AM AEST
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I can really empathise
and it will come as no surprise
that I feel this way myself
most every morning
When I wake my thoughts are weighty
no surprise I'm nearly eighty
and I shed a tear or two
whilst I am yawning
Still it's not bad in a way
I've been given another day
and ignore the aches and pains
as I arise
Though I'm feeling pale and wan
I'm still glad I haven't gone
and survey my lovely garden
with young eyes.
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