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When I Look Into Your Eyes
Contributed by
Johnson
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Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 06:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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When I look into your eyes,
I see a love that trancseceds time.
I see all that matters, all that I need.
But as I see these wondrous things,
I see a love that will never be.
The very thing that could set me free
also has within it the potential to destroy me.
But it is all worth it in the end
When I look into your eyes.
Copyright ©
Johnson
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2003-07-29 18:35:00]
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Re: When I Look Into Your Eyes
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by Daniel on
Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 07:10:39 PM AEST
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| eegad... dreamy this is very dreamy... but i wonder about you people who just go for the look... don't go for the love that will never be, take the love that sets you free indeed!! nice write!! kudos! ;0) -daniel |
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Re: When I Look Into Your Eyes
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by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 08:15:11 PM AEST
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"The very thing that could set me free
also has within it the potential to destroy me."
Truer words were never written. :) But that's the chance you've gotta take. Great write! Beautiful!
~ Moonlit |
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Re: When I Look Into Your Eyes
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by Vampy on
Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 11:32:49 PM AEST
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| Beautifull written, but I agree with Daniel... don't go for the love that will never be... find the love that sets you free and makes you happy 100%. |
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Re: When I Look Into Your Eyes
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 30th July 2003 @ 04:40:54 AM AEST
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| A lucid write. venkat |
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Re: When I Look Into Your Eyes
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 30th July 2003 @ 07:01:12 PM AEST
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| This poem kicks ass! Don't not say anything Cody... keep putting it down on paper. We're going to make it home... |
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Re: When I Look Into Your Eyes
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 1st August 2003 @ 04:39:14 AM AEST
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| dearest cody, beautiful poem! write on.. warm welcome to ypdc:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: When I Look Into Your Eyes
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by Saira on
Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 05:44:57 PM AEST
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An exquisite write. Well done Johnson!
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