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Forego

Contributed by daniel on Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 05:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

i didn't really have think about it
no i never should have thought to
bring you in this mess.
doesn't do much to impress you.
know i could have ever run this thing
while at a moment i can't do anything
so forget what i said.
get it out of your head.
in a second i'll get uninteresting
in even less you'll find it pressing
you down in the corner.
like i'm living in the former.
in a minute circumstance will change
that's coming out from the other page
folded down as a note.
capsizing this little boat.

surprise to see this coming, oh no
a day in the works is one thing, oh

forego the storm of the summer.
play abstinations from the bummers.

there wasn't really much to do on it
seemed like it wouldn't have a chance
to mess me all up.
breaking up my tough.
know i could have done it differently
where does it say to be an obscenity
silenced by a hand.
from the body of lamb chop.
in a bit you'll seem to go again
where you go i don't know again
like the world has fallen.
worse than amsterdam, holland.
in awhile the rain will subsidize
who takes care of it but you now i
want to live freely.
live you right next to me.

surprise to see this coming, oh no
a day worked out is just one thing, oh

forego the storm of the summer
play abstinations from the bummers
creeping up in your face...
stealing away all the grace...

well i don't have much more in may.
and you know what i'm going to say.
surprise to see this coming.
a day in the works is one thing.

so forgoe the storm of the summer
play absinations from the bummers
creeping down your toes...
a pain in all of those...

Copyright © daniel ... [ 2003-07-29 17:35:00]
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Re: Forego (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 1st August 2003 @ 01:47:53 AM AEST
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19 reads and no comments? I think this deserves at least a comment -- you probably worked hard on it 'cause the quality shows. Very good write Daniel!

--Ashley

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