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simple
Contributed by
Nate
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Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 12:35:00 PM in AEST
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Isn't enough cigerettes in the world,
for me to pay attention,
isn't enough reasons in my life,
for me to show affection,
isn't someone in the same boat,
to give me direction,
and there isn't enough jail cells,
to show me correction.
rebellious is my middle name. .. .
Copyright ©
Nate
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2003-07-29 12:35:00]
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Re: simple
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by PsychoticDreamz on
Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 12:45:55 PM AEST
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This reminds me a lot of a dear friend. Nice write..Makes a lot of sense if you ask me..but anyways..yeah, good write...
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Re: simple
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by soul_je on
Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 12:51:08 PM AEST
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| This sound a little like my brother, the only thing is that he doesn't smoke. Nice write though. |
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Re: simple
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 02:21:03 PM AEST
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I know quite a few people who fit that description
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Re: simple
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 02:44:07 PM AEST
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This was nicely done, Nate....
Interesting...
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Re: simple
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by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 07:50:18 PM AEST
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I actually don't know anyone like that. The only 2 that come close are either very affectionate or has this deep longing to have someone to give affection to. Guess I'm lucky in that respect, lol. Great poem though.
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Re: simple
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by jeanie on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 06:06:10 AM AEST
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aha, this was a NICE one, I liked it alot! there's need of such rebellious ppl :D
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