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Confession
Contributed by
Nate
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Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 11:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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On this day,
I confess my love,
to the beautiful girl,
thou shall never shove,
or push away,
for you have my heart,
we belong together and shall never part,
you took my breath,
whe you spoke to me,
you embraced my heart,
when you wrote to me,
you filled my mind with beautiful things,
and for that i thank you for eternity,
you are the first to do those things you do,
my heart beats fast when i look at you,
i think that those are the things that make love true,
those are the reasons that i love you...
I love you.
Copyright ©
Nate
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2003-07-29 11:35:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Confession
(User Rating: 1 ) by soul_je on
Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 12:35:41 PM AEST (User
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you wrote a wonderful poem here full with emotion. i look forward for your next. |
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Re: Confession
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 03:57:57 PM AEST (User
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Ahh Nate... I see that you have a romantic side along with the dark side of you.... that's good... I like that...
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Re: Confession
(User Rating: 1 ) by jeanie on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 06:14:59 AM AEST (User
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hmm, not bad...I prefer your "angrying ones" though
jeanie |
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