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Observing
Contributed by
SuicidalSon
on
Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 11:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I look ahead
leaving all behind me
to the day I am dead
with only corpses around me
I look back
I was thinking then
the sense I lack
I should be giving in
I look up
my future awaits me
God is a chump
the way that he hates me
I look down
soon I will be there
on face is no frown
for some reason Im not scared
I look away
from what detests me
awaiting the day
when death infests me
I look around
at this life Im in
my hands are bound
Im commiting sin
And now I look
deep down inside me
my life is a book
and this poem reminds me
So now I look
I see Im observant
if I wrote a book
would you people desrve it
Finally I look
do you know what I see
if my life I took
all of my fans would not be
Thank you!
Copyright ©
SuicidalSon
... [
2003-07-29 11:05:00]
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Re: Observing
(User Rating: 1 )
by BlackFire9786 on
Sunday, 10th August 2003 @ 08:55:05 PM AEST
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This was a great poem, i'm surprised no one has commented, i especially like the end, great write
Lisa |
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Re: Observing
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by mercedes on
Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 10:41:14 AM AEST
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| Well consider yourself up one more fan |
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