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Primal stream
Contributed by
vincy
on
Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 09:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Stranded on an island called exile
where the self inflicted pain
makes the itch of longing remain
without being scratched again!.
As I wander on primary rocks
searching for my maker in gratitude
for my "easy come, easy go" attitude.
Since I insist on demanding peace
without an all out archetypal struggle
yet, with a good old primal scream.
I reach out, arms wide open, longing still
within the language of cracked stones
for a breathe of fresh air, till
I can walk that lonely walk
up and down in rapid pace
searching for a place
where I can face
the choice of our making.
I have no time left to rest
before the incoming test
hits me from the back, at best
that's exactly where it hurts.
I am here with such hope
that I'll be able to cope
as the outgoing tide
will take away to hide
those turbolent sounds...
While voices keep on falling
from the corners of my eyes
I can trace the silent cries
of forbidden angels
washed out of the sky
coming to rest
in our bosom.
Copyright ©
vincy
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2003-07-29 09:05:00]
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Re: Primal stream
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by xxmonstahxx on
Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 12:14:22 PM AEST
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| nicely written... |
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Re: Primal stream
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 02:58:37 PM AEST
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exquisite ramblings indeed
Shari |
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Re: Primal stream
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 03:10:59 PM AEST
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| ramble away anytime, great write:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Primal stream
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 05:48:42 PM AEST
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Hi Vincy,
this is good, you can almost feel the conflick in this poem.very well done. |
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