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five senses
Contributed by
tinka_belle
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Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 02:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I see you face before my eyes
But it is I you cannot see
I see the love you cannot give
Refuse to give to me
I smell the beer in your breath
But you cannot see my tears
I can see the way you’re acting
Hiding behind your fears
I taste the lies you say to me
But I pretend I do not know
I will always feel neglected
And so, so alone
I can touch your outer body
But you cannot feel the devotion
I can see that you don’t need me
And feel no real emotion
I hear the words you say to me
But I do not understand
How you can hurt me time after time
And still call yourself a man
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Re: five senses
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by krystal on
Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 04:01:40 AM AEST
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| tinka belle this is wonderful, well expressed and well written...such an awful tragedy for children to go through so much at such a tender young age. I really enjoyed this, the last line is what really grabbed me for their is so much truth to it...fabulous. Krystal :) |
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Re: five senses
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by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 07:12:06 AM AEST
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Yep, I can relate to this. I just submitted a poem about my parents, in fact. They can be real, well, buttholes. :P
~ Moonlit |
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Re: five senses
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by xxmonstahxx on
Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 01:21:41 PM AEST
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| so sad and yet so true.. |
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Re: five senses
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 05:47:18 PM AEST
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this was very well expressed, my father was an alcoholic and had his abusive moments..it is not the way children should live
Shari |
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Re: five senses
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by hardcoreputa on
Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 01:11:16 PM AEST
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| you have been through so much. these horors that happen when we are children stay with us through our lives... i hope you have been able to cope a little bit... you have a lot of hurt that you mask with your hatred... a touching write... its good to know there are other ppl who have gone through similar things as me, but i wish no one else had too... ~Apryl |
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