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I'm going to write screamo metal about how much I hate you and try to book shows
Contributed by
liveindreams
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Monday, 28th July 2003 @ 03:35:00 PM in AEST
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I HATE YOU
I kept trying to tell myself I didn’t
But every lie-drenched sentence you utter turns me from a good girl to a villain
I GOT MY FINGER ON THE TRIGGER
Tell me, is this what you want?
Do you want to see me die like THIS?
IT DOESN’T MATTER IF I DO IT
I already don’t exist
What’s left to talk about?
You’re a walking contradiction
If hypocrisy were a crime
you’d get DEATH upon conviction
LISTEN
You make absolutely zero sense
I’m this close to the edge
You want my death on your conscience?
NOTHING WILL EVER CHANGE
Not here, not now, not ever again
But I want to see you fake tears fall for me
You were always the best at pretend
You’re such a great liar
For 5 minutes I believed you liked me
But you hate me, so I hate you
And we compliment each other nicely
You always complain about pain and all the hurt you’ve been through
You never care when YOU inflict it
What if I turn this gun on you?
What happens then?
WELL!?!
You going to take back everything you said?
Claim you really “love” me
That you ALWAYS were my friend?
YOU’RE SUCH A FAKE
and you know what else?
You wouldn’t be able to make me feel like this
With a bullet in your head…
I’m insane
We both know it
But don’t you feel stupid
THE GUN’S NOT EVEN LOADED (haha!)
I’d never die for you you’re not worth it
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2003-07-28 15:35:00]
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Re: I'm going to write screamo metal about how much I hate you and try to book shows
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Monday, 28th July 2003 @ 06:02:58 PM AEST
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| this is really good... glad the last three lines are there. also, I love your title. :) |
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Re: I'm going to write screamo metal about how much I hate you and try to book shows
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by PsychoticDreamz on
Monday, 28th July 2003 @ 08:03:12 PM AEST
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I love this, great write...Ive often had this thought about another...very explainitory..Nice work
*_-Psych-_*
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Re: I'm going to write screamo metal about how much I hate you and try to book shows
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by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 30th July 2003 @ 03:06:42 PM AEST
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Hurray for you.
You might like to read my poem
"He's not the only one" |
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