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The American Dream
Contributed by
loserkid
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Monday, 28th July 2003 @ 05:35:00 AM in AEST
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As I walk through these ashes I say to my self thy will has been done but at what cost the nation is torn but we are no longer run by tyranny the dictatorship of Bush is gone and thousnads have lost their lives but those who still remian will now be able to live in love, peace, and unity thy will be done. As we clear these burnt bodies and pile the bones we will be able to start a new land like our fore fathers but this time greed isn't in sight nor is ignorance of our fellow beings let us now join hands in unity and say thy will be done. A distant bell rings and my face wet it is time to go but the words linger in my head "THY WILL BE DONE" and for now Bush is in power
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Re: The American Dream
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by shelby on
Monday, 28th July 2003 @ 10:43:02 AM AEST
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I enjoy the style of your writing but not the content of this poem. I will not read Bush bashing nor America bashing poetry. To me its a waste of great talent using it to bash my country and my president.There is another poet on here thats great with his writing but focussing on nothing but badmouthing America. I dont stomache that either. I cant tell you what to write but as long as its not on the negative because Im American Ill read it if its nasty towards me or my country sorry but no I will not read.
Michelle |
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Re: The American Dream
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 05:10:25 AM AEST
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| Your fore word drew me in..you have good expression...and my friend Michelle has already commented on this.. I agree with her. Blessings. venkat |
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Re: The American Dream
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by SpreadYourWings on
Wednesday, 30th July 2003 @ 01:45:19 AM AEST
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"To me its a waste of great talent using it to bash my country and my president.There is another poet on here thats great with his writing but focussing on nothing but badmouthing America."
Theres nothing wrong with badmouthing the nation as I see it deserves it. We treat our minorities like ***** and we kill innocent people daily. Maybe you don't see it, but I see it all the time. Everyday we kill innocent Iraqis. We had to kill innocent Afghanistanis becuase we couldn't find Osama Bin Laden. When I see this country as equal and what our Founding Fathers settled this land for, I'll take in America. But until then, I've got nothing else positive to say about the nation.
Great write btw. Really enjoyed the views in it. |
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Re: The American Dream
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by SpreadYourWings on
Wednesday, 30th July 2003 @ 01:48:19 AM AEST
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"To me its a waste of great talent using it to bash my country and my president.There is another poet on here thats great with his writing but focussing on nothing but badmouthing America."
Theres nothing wrong with badmouthing the nation as I see it deserves it. We treat our minorities like ***** and we kill innocent people daily. Maybe you don't see it, but I see it all the time. Everyday we kill innocent Iraqis. We had to kill innocent Afghanistanis becuase we couldn't find Osama Bin Laden. When I see this country as equal and what our Founding Fathers settled this land for, I'll take in America. But until then, I've got nothing else positive to say about the nation.
Great write btw. Really enjoyed the views in it. |
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