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Your Already Taken
Contributed by
sexygirl
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Sunday, 27th July 2003 @ 08:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I wish I could be beside you....
Such a sadness falls over me as you are already taken....
It would of felt so right, you would of shown me life from another point of view....
I wanted to touch you just to say hi, but I couldn't stop my hands from shaken....
She is so lucky to have such a wonderful man to hold her tight.....
My eyes followed you when you walked across the floor....
I am sorry if I stopped and stared, I know it's not polite....
In everything you say and do, I will not bother you anymore....
She holds the key to your heart not me....
I will always be a friend to you when you need someone to listen to....
Remember me.....
Because I will be the one missing you....
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sexygirl
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2003-07-27 20:05:00]
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Re: Your Already Taken
(User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on
Sunday, 17th August 2003 @ 05:20:30 PM AEST
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This is a very good poem. I can really relate to it. It's well written.
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Re: Your Already Taken
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by viki on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 08:25:35 PM AEST
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| Your poem was really similar to mine. I guess there are alot of people out there that feel the same as us. The one I wrote was originally for my brother to give to his crush. Then I tried to change it to my point of view but it wasn't the same and it lost meaning, seeing as it is dedicated to my brother. I really loved your poem, and I voted 4 stars. Hope you find someone special. I know I am still in the search and am not going to give up. |
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