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Nice Feelings Shared
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Saira
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Sunday, 27th July 2003 @ 08:35:00 AM in AEST
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Been a few months, started writing,
Didn’t know within this poetess hiding.
Very much naive I am in many ways,
Learning to catch the wisdom of poetic rays.
Serious criticism I take it as a praise,
Know it does good and helps in raise
The skills I possess, will blossom one day,
To let the feelings out, found a lovely way.
Used to make haste, now will slow down,
Work on the tips I have just found.
Your warm suggestions, I'll keep in mind,
Thank you my dear friend for being so kind.
Much love
Saira
Your beautiful poetic rays lite up my room,
Enabling me to see the rosebud in your heart,
Opening slowly 'til in full bloom.
To accept another's suggestions as praise,
Shows me you are very humble in all your ways!
When one is humble, close to the earth,
He will be exalted to God's creative hand.
Recreated and given a "newbirth!"
A humble lady so kind, loving, and far away......
With so few words, said in just the right way,
Has enriched my feelings, and made my day!
Warm Creative Love,
Lovingcritters
Connie Sue
Copyright ©
Saira
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2003-07-27 08:35:00]
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Re: Nice Feelings Shared
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 27th July 2003 @ 08:52:39 AM AEST
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very lovely gals, wonderful emotions and a budding friendship
Shari |
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Re: Nice Feelings Shared
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by Saira on
Sunday, 27th July 2003 @ 11:26:47 PM AEST
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| Thanks Shari dear. It just happened in a flash. |
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Re: Nice Feelings Shared
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 28th July 2003 @ 07:07:24 AM AEST
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My new dear friend Saira,
I've read all your lovely poems, dear.....and I must confess.....what suggestions could I possibly give you, Saira....your poems are without defect....they are absolutely perfect!
Enjoyed them so much....you have such a beautiful gift!
Warm poetic love,
you new friend
loving critters
Connie |
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Re: Nice Feelings Shared
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by Saira on
Monday, 28th July 2003 @ 07:40:57 AM AEST
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| Thanks for your kind remarks dear Connie. |
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Re: Nice Feelings Shared
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by gohar on
Wednesday, 30th July 2003 @ 07:51:34 PM AEST
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AsSalam Dear Saira,
A great poem and very enriched thought.
Congratulations. Keep on writing.
Ashraf Gohar Goreja |
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Re: Nice Feelings Shared
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by LovingWhispers on
Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 10:49:39 PM AEST
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| Yesss...Connie Sue..Such a dear person..And you are just as dear to show your appreciation for such a wonderful woman.You do have real talent and you have a way of showing your heart so well...Lovely. |
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