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Where Are You?
Contributed by
Unaekseveer1
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Saturday, 10th August 2002 @ 03:06:26 PM in AEST
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My lord please help me find
The one that is for me
I know she痴 here somewhere
But it痴 so dark I cannot see.
Will I drift through life forever
Not knowing who she is
Or is she just around the corner
Stood waiting for my kiss?
I beg you give me an answer
No more questions shall I ask
For you who is so mighty
This should be a simple task.
I値l keep looking in the darkness
I can't give up the hope
That one day we値l find each other
Then maybe we値l elope.
I thought that I had found her
I thought she loved me so
But she went and found another
So I had to let her go.
I have so many thoughts
Running around inside my head
I need someone to share them
And yes also share my bed.
I feel I already know her
In my mind she is so clear
The woman of my dreams
I so wish that she were here?
Just tell her where I am
Light the way so she can see
I知 alone here in this dream
She値l awake and love with me.
Copyright ﾂｩ
Unaekseveer1
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2002-08-10 15:06:26]
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Re: Where Are You?
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by humphdj on
Saturday, 10th August 2002 @ 07:20:30 PM AEST
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I liked this a lot.....flows great........
Good write
Rgds
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Re: Where Are You?
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Saturday, 10th August 2002 @ 09:20:40 PM AEST
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Thanks Dave, When's she going to flow under my bridge?
With love
Dean |
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Re: Where Are You?
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by chatabox on
Saturday, 10th August 2002 @ 11:37:12 PM AEST
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she will be found when your least expecting it and then you will know she is the one. Dont rush it my dear, let things take their course naturally.......
sweet poem Dean, you have a lot to love to give the right person.
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Re: Where Are You?
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by Chrissie on
Sunday, 11th August 2002 @ 01:40:00 AM AEST
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A lovely, heartfelt poem...I believe there is always someone out there for everyone...keep faith.
Chrissie |
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Re: Where Are You?
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Sunday, 11th August 2002 @ 08:41:46 PM AEST
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Ta very muchly Chrissie, I'm glad you liked and I hope you're right because I'm still trying to! ;-)
With love
Dean |
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Re: Where Are You?
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Sunday, 11th August 2002 @ 08:48:06 PM AEST
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Hi Penny, I do worry most of the time that my ability to love someone properly, may fade with time! Probably not possible, I don't know?
And "Sweet"! Do you know what this does to a bloke?;-)
With love
Dean |
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Re: Where Are You?
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by ShadowsCloud on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 06:54:24 AM AEST
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Dean, This is a beautiful and heartfelt poem. I think that you will find her when you least expect it. I believe that there is a soulmate out there for every one. But sometimes it just takes us a while to find them. Never give up hope.
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Re: Where Are You?
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 07:17:03 AM AEST
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Never Candice,
this is my only goal in life, to find her who will share all with little ole me! But nobody can help you look!
Thankyou for your helpfully reassuring words. I need them more than ever.
With love
Dean:-) |
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Re: Where Are You?
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by ShadowsCloud on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 07:20:43 AM AEST
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Dean, that's true enough, no one can help you look. Although it is always good to think that who we are looking is also looking for us. At least that I what I like to think.
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Re: Where Are You?
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by POETRY_AND_LOVE_BUG on
Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 05:34:19 PM AEST
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Great write
hope you find her and treat as you said
and i know just from hearing this
i know what's in your head!!!!!!!!!!!!!
but i know you'll do her right
sleep with her and hold her tight!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
oh yeah and just to say, great write!!!!!!!!!! |
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Re: Where Are You?
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 09:05:41 PM AEST
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Thankyou for your wonderfully poetic comments POETRY_AND_LOVE_BUG.
I too hope so and yes I will do my damndest to see that she's afforded the utmost respect and love filled gentle warmness that she does deserve!
With love
Dean:-) |
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