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Another form loserkid
Contributed by
loserkid
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Sunday, 27th July 2003 @ 05:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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As I sit here thinking
of what I did to you
how I ripped your heart out and fed it to my dog
how I sold your soul to the corner market
sitting here were I did this
how my uncleansed soul now will sit here and fade away into the blackness of my heart
I will rember how I ate your spleen and used your lungs for a pillow so I could sleepsound
all I could do is laugh in silence but
now your the one who is laughing in silence
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2003-07-27 05:05:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Another form loserkid
(User Rating: 1 ) by vincy on
Monday, 28th July 2003 @ 01:50:41 AM AEST (User
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blatent language and violent imagery
rubs in the message that this guy is tough,
the irony of the poem is in the last line
which says quite a lot about the nature of life. |
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Re: Another form loserkid
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jackhammer on
Monday, 28th July 2003 @ 10:15:51 PM AEST (User
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this i thought was very cool.I'm no poems expert , but i know that i liked it ;) |
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