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Memory
Contributed by
Unaekseveer1
on
Saturday, 10th August 2002 @ 03:02:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Who would’ve believed
The mighty me
Broken apart
Like dead twigs from a tree
I don’t want to live
In this world without
The love you gave
I have no doubt
You say now you didn’t
Ever love me at all
My god how this hurts
How my tears freely fall
You really don’t realise
What you mean to me
I meant it when I said
I would die for thee
Every day at work
Surrounded by blokes
I couldn’t stop crying
I heard them crack jokes
My sad eyes drowning
Swollen and red
I want to be with you
Or can’t wait to be dead
When will I stop crying
Don’t know that I will
You were not lying
You cared how I feel
We’ve broken my heart
But I’ll love you always
Think about what you tell him
You told me in our days
You once liked my football
Now you like his
I actually feel ill
Thinking he gets your kiss
You said I was the one
Fate brought us together
You got jealous and missed me
Why won’t you remember
In a room full of people
They’d know we’re together
Because all could just sense it
Why won’t you remember
You had such a good memory
And you tingled at my touch
You’ve forgotten so quickly
How we understood so much
What you think you feel for him now
You did feel for me
It’s just that I wasn’t being
Forbidden fruit, soon you’ll see
That’s all you are to him
He couldn’t love you like I do
I don’t want to see
Your heart broken too.
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Unaekseveer1
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2002-08-10 15:02:01]
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Re: Memory
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by Suzy on
Saturday, 10th August 2002 @ 04:17:07 PM AEST
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This is a lovely sad write...even tho you are obviously hurting you don't want her to be hurt..now that is love...hopefully by sharing all of this you will be able to begin to move on best wishes to you....
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Re: Memory
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Saturday, 10th August 2002 @ 09:35:25 PM AEST
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Thankyou Lasca, I hope so too, but it's taking longer than I ever could've imagined!
With love
Dean |
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Re: Memory
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by MisterRight on
Wednesday, 21st August 2002 @ 03:37:57 PM AEST
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That's true love if I ever knew the meaning of it, through your own pain you worry about hers. Love gets no better than that. I feel for you.
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Re: Memory
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Tuesday, 27th August 2002 @ 09:49:58 AM AEST
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Curtis, thankyou for caring enough to write!
I know you've been hurting too and I hope you also overcome your love pains! Sorry for my delayed reaction, as I said to Lasca I keep forgetting to check for comments left!
With love
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Re: Memory
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by ShadowsCloud on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 09:18:07 AM AEST
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Dean, this is really sad, it brought tears to my eyes. I felt this way a few years ago.
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Re: Memory
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 09:27:01 AM AEST
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Candice,
I hadn't read this for a while, and now I remember why! Yes it has tears in my eyes too, again!!!!! I wish it wouldn't do that! When does it stop?
Thankyou for understanding.
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Re: Memory
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by ShadowsCloud on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 09:41:38 AM AEST
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Dean, Unfortunately it takes a long time for it to stop. But eventually it does. Sorry that I couldn't have a more direct answer, but there really isn't one because with each person it is different. I hope it siops for you soon. But I have a poem that I wrote about 5 years ago about someone who I loved and then lost and it still makes me cry.
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