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Butterfly's Flight
Contributed by
yellow_sundragon
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Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 07:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Two yellow butterflies,
Spiralling around each other,
Way up into the deep blue skies,
Chasing around one after another.
I sat in the long green grass,
Watching them in their path,
It makes me think of your disease,
The beauty fills me with wrath.
Your world is so dark and bare,
Your eyes are filled with tears,
Heart's filled with despair,
Can't sleep for all your fears.
The only way you can see an end,
Is with the sharp edge of a knife,
It's only farther you descend,
Into your heartache and strife.
I'm so mad at the Fates,
For giving you such a dismal existence,
I hold onto my heart and wait,
Wishing I could cross your distance.
It's not fair that well I enjoy the sun,
You are left unseen in the twilight,
My heart and soul become undone,
As I watch the butterfly's flight.
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Re: Butterfly's Flight
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by lil_angel on
Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 08:49:08 PM AEST
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| ummm is this about me cause if it is i dont cut anymore...but then again maybe its not about me....good poem either way. |
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Re: Butterfly's Flight
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by lil_angel on
Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 08:49:36 PM AEST
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| ummm is this about me cause if it is i dont cut anymore...but then again maybe its not about me....good poem either way. |
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Re: Butterfly's Flight
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by lil_angel on
Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 08:50:42 PM AEST
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| ummm is this about me cause if it is i dont cut anymore...but then again maybe its not about me....good poem either way. |
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Re: Butterfly's Flight
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 09:04:49 PM AEST
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| jaime this is sooo beautiful and loving,i wasnt sure why you listed it under 'angry' until i re-read it, i see now... but your heartfelt musings whilst watching those butterflies i too, appreciate, as i too care for her, yours is a kind loving soul, big hugs n' love, nessa |
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Re: Butterfly's Flight
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 09:43:20 PM AEST
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beautiful way to express your concern and wishes for another....sometimes I have felt that way reading some of these poems from poets on here where I can see the beauty in their hearts.
Shari |
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Re: Butterfly's Flight
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 27th July 2003 @ 12:48:31 AM AEST
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Awww Jaime, this is beautiful...truely amazing, *hugs!!!*
And hey, i'm not going anywhere anytime soon, although i want to, i also want to meet my new adopted sisters first *grins*
Love you loads
-Becca |
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Re: Butterfly's Flight
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by MoonlitAngel on
Sunday, 27th July 2003 @ 04:45:29 AM AEST
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I already told you how beautiful this is, so I won't say it here. Hehehe. But I will say I agree, and I love *her* too, hehe, and yeah. K I'm gonna go now before I start blabbering out stupid things. :P
~ Dee |
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Re: Butterfly's Flight
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by yellow_sundragon on
Sunday, 27th July 2003 @ 06:39:14 AM AEST
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*smiles* I never said that this one was to you, because you always got so embarrased when I said I should write a poem for you. Didn't want to embarras you. Now I'm glad I posted this one, because your gonna STAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sorry, just too happy...... love you loads Becca, and can't wait to see you too.... though, I have to invest in shin pads first..... you kick too much....
*J* |
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Re: Butterfly's Flight
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by wyrd_faerie on
Sunday, 27th July 2003 @ 05:37:09 PM AEST
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| aah...this is very beautiful...i love her very much too... |
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Re: Butterfly's Flight
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by shelby on
Monday, 28th July 2003 @ 03:24:15 AM AEST
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a wide arrary of emotions in this write and Im sure we are all feeling the ame way.Well done.
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Re: Butterfly's Flight
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by shelby on
Monday, 28th July 2003 @ 03:24:24 AM AEST
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a wide arrary of emotions in this write and Im sure we are all feeling the same way.Well done.
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Re: Butterfly's Flight
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by SweetRhythm on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 01:04:55 PM AEST
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Jamie, this is a lovely poem, very well writen & ever so sincere & caring. Nicely done.
Your fellow poet
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