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Cold
Contributed by
Drew
on
Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 06:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I drew alongside your shadow
I found no warmth
I grew close to your image
But the cold poured forth
It was then in a shiver
Cold hands knocking
An icy shaft from their Quiver
I turned to face you
With my eyes did I trace you
And steam lept from skin
as the shaft had burst aflame
Copyright ©
Drew
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2003-07-26 18:35:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Cold
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ilhar on
Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 07:20:43 PM AEST (User
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actually i liked this a lot...very vivid imagery
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