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SILENCES
Contributed by
sanju
on
Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 02:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Less than a year ago
We were brimming
With concupiscent phrases.
In bright, sun-lit rooms
Riddled with holes,
We swivelled our drinks
In our hands
As we chewed on
Scrags of trivia-
Stuffing them into our mouths
Like tender meat-balls.
Why then-
Today as we sit face to face
In this fancy restaurant
Under the surreal flood
Of uninhibited light;
With feet poised and perpetually
Pointing towards the door
And the shadows
Disrobing beyond-
Do we sneak furtive glances
Over our shoulders
Mouthing nothing but silences?
Copyright ©
sanju
... [
2003-07-26 14:05:00]
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Re: SILENCES
(User Rating: 1 )
by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Sunday, 27th July 2003 @ 12:17:46 AM AEST
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Hi Sanju,
THIS SOUND LIKE A FAMILY IN TROUBLE,I HOPE THEY ALL LIFE.
NICE WRITE .KEEP UP THE GOOD WRITE. |
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Re: SILENCES
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 03:43:18 AM AEST
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| Restaurant scene is O.k..but the couple could not break silence...It is nice to read beautiful scenes of busy life with a hush of silence...Sanju..good luck!...seen your comments on two of my poems . thank you very much. venkat |
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Re: SILENCES
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by chandramohan on
Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 08:00:36 AM AEST
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yesterdays sweet memories consoles
to-days sorrowful life.
good presentation.keepit up.sanju.
chandramohan.
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