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Laughter In The Rain
Contributed by
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
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Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 12:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Laughter In The Rain
I see laughter in the rain,
Or is it crying from the pain?
You tend not to show whats inside,
Your true feelings you learned to hide.
You keep your emotions locked in a cage,
Trying to hide your side of rage.
No one gets in without the key,
But yet you never give it for free.
I played your game, I tired to advance,
I played by the rules, I danced the dance.
But yet you stand so far away,
Keeping your feelings far at bay.
I once saw the laughter in the rain,
But now it’s crying from the pain.
Copyright ©
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
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2003-07-26 12:35:00]
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Re: Laughter In The Rain
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by shelby on
Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 01:40:16 PM AEST
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outstanding write.
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Re: Laughter In The Rain
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 05:17:13 PM AEST
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Wow, Jeff..awesome write....
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Re: Laughter In The Rain
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 05:30:27 PM AEST
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very well done
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Re: Laughter In The Rain
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by Stalkee on
Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 05:57:46 PM AEST
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| awesome! just absolutely awesome! |
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Re: Laughter In The Rain
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by Metalmouth666 on
Sunday, 27th July 2003 @ 01:31:03 PM AEST
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Very good man, touching
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