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~:*circles*:~
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 04:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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circles in time
woven above and below me
south and west
north and east
we believe this will be best
from somewhere deep within' me
day night, night day
true love will find a way
our loves the gentle breezes
in those stars of the night
in our circles of romance
of morning dove in flight
circles of time
loves circle took us by surprize
circle your arms around me, let me look into your eyes
hearts, souls and minds will spin
as hearts beat in circles again
will be one when once were two
and all i know is i love you
hearts unbound
around and around
that first kiss will be so devine
upon this earth our love is so fine
now sharing love in the land of the midnight sun
together at last, yes it will be done
°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*
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Re: ~:*circles*:~
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 04:59:48 AM AEST
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joyous, beautiful
Shari
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Re: ~:*circles*:~
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by venkat on
Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 05:04:01 AM AEST
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| Excellent..you have reached to a new level of consciousness..So beautifully written..this is one of your best... after many poems this is superb... venkat |
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Re: ~:*circles*:~
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by LovingWhispers on
Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 05:28:28 AM AEST
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One of your best?? hmmm...personally I think your best is yet to come ..and will be written when finally the circle is completed ;)
Love as always my friend with the rainbow soul (((huggers))) xxx |
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Re: ~:*circles*:~
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by LovingWhispers on
Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 05:32:12 AM AEST
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| oops...lol...too busy dreaming(of times to come;) ..I forgot to tell you how beautifully warm your poem is .. :) |
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Re: ~:*circles*:~
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 11:24:34 AM AEST
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Awwww Nesssssss..... I'm so thrilled for you after reading this wonderful poem....
Hugs and woofies..
Jenni |
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Re: ~:*circles*:~
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by norm on
Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 12:02:20 PM AEST
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The depth of this poem is infinite..Like eternal
things, they ask more question than they answer...
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Everything is circular,
It follows an earthly pattern,
Where birth and death are on an arc
And so it is on Saturn.
And so is love that follows form
If only people realize,
A merr-go-round of starts and stops
No matter how many tries.
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Re: ~:*circles*:~
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by shelby on
Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 12:20:33 PM AEST
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Nessa this is lovely and flowing as your love is Im very happy for you.
michelle |
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Re: ~:*circles*:~
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Monday, 28th July 2003 @ 10:10:27 PM AEST
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| Nathan thinks you are crazy, "she must have love-bells in her head", what do you think Nessa ...... I thought this was wonderful and I wish you both beautiful tomorrow's and every special moment life has to bring, Love and huggs, Val |
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Re: ~:*circles*:~
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 28th July 2003 @ 11:15:21 PM AEST
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| awww, val!! he's so sweet, please tell nathan that the lill ~:*clock*:~ is up; its our ~:*time*:~ and; we like the bells:) love you all, so much, xxxxxxx.. |
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by yellow_sundragon on
Wednesday, 30th July 2003 @ 02:42:25 PM AEST
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aww! Nessa!! This is beautiful!!
*J* |
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Re: ~:*circles*:~
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by Bongo on
Friday, 1st August 2003 @ 01:09:53 AM AEST
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Speaking of circles, may i add this thought
From my childhood days, i was always taught
LOVE MAKES THE WORLD GO ROUND
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Re: ~:*circles*:~
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by xxmonstahxx on
Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 01:47:15 AM AEST
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| you write with such passion and love |
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