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Pretty Girl
Contributed by
isaiyan
on
Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 03:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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It's my angel.
There's the pretty girl.
They stare as she walks on by.
Eyes glued.
On the pretty girl.
She smiles at all the guys.
She's no angel.
Not the pretty girl.
She's wicked as they come.
They don't believe me.
About the pretty girl.
She knows she's won them all.
But this female.
This pretty girl.
She knows that I know of her.
She's angry.
Angry, pretty girl.
She needs to leave them alone.
They call her sweetie.
They call her pretty girl.
But little do they know.
About this demon.
The wicked pretty girl
she steals their eyes and their mind.
Copyright ©
isaiyan
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2003-07-26 03:05:00]
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Re: Pretty Girl
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by deadly_blaZe on
Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 03:24:17 AM AEST
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I really liked the way i wrote this.. ill keep readin ur stuff if u keep it up!
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Re: Pretty Girl
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by ArdRi79 on
Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 06:47:08 AM AEST
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| *Grins* this is very good, I like the way you repeated pretty girl it offset the bitterness that would have been in this poem and made me laugh, nice one |
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