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Goodbye Forever Mom

Contributed by TeenageEmoGirl on Friday, 25th July 2003 @ 11:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



Mommy, mommy, I love you so
I promise Daddy will never know
How you take your anger out on me
Each and every night
Don't worry mom, it's alright
The pain has gone numb, I can't feel anymore
There's no feeling once I'm down on the floor
I turn black and blue whenever you're mad
Your kicks to the stomach aren't really that bad
The only thing that hurts is all built inside
The fact that you laughed at my thoughts of suicide
Mom I don't care about the past
I just can't take this anymore, each day worst than the last
Beat me til I was almost dead, and when you were done
Looked at me unconcious, didn't bother to dial 911
Is it true mom? Am I really a mistake from the start?
Do you even know how bad it hurts, I'm ***** ripped apart.
I pretend I don't hear you cry yourself to sleep at night
I'm so ***** helpless, I just want to make it right
Stop yelling stop screaming I'm deaf to what you say
Mom there's no words that can make this family okay
You've made me hate what I am, and I can't take that anymore
You've made me forget what life's worth living for
I'm staring down the barrel of the gun
I point it at my head
Goodbye forever mom
I hope you miss me when I'm dead




Copyright © TeenageEmoGirl ... [ 2003-07-25 23:45:00]
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Re: Goodbye Forever Mom (User Rating: 1 )
by Stalkee on Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 12:01:47 AM AEST
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oh me....this is full with emotion that's for sure.....hope you're not serious about the end of this poem....


Re: Goodbye Forever Mom (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 12:12:59 AM AEST
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This is good. I have problems with my mom, not the same ones, but I can sorta relate. It's hard when your mom betrays you. I hope you really didn't kill yourself, though. The world is tough, but it's not better off without you.

*J*


Re: Goodbye Forever Mom (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 12:17:54 AM AEST
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Oh wow, I didn't know you were hurting like this. I am sorry for all the pain you have been thru. It sounds like you need to get out of home and find somewhere safe to go. Don't take your life because of this tho. As I have said before, there are people that care about you. Look after yourself and keep the poems coming, I look forward to hearing more.


Re: Goodbye Forever Mom (User Rating: 1 )
by loserkid on Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 04:43:14 AM AEST
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this is emotional very emotional


Re: Goodbye Forever Mom (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 09:00:02 AM AEST
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yikes, hope the ending isn't true and you're still here. Great expression. :)


Re: Goodbye Forever Mom (User Rating: 1 )
by Ellie on Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 04:22:44 PM AEST
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wow, that was really sad...please don't really be serious about killing yourself. i use to be suicidal, but when i thought about how much i would miss all my friends and my other family that loves me and cares about me, and how much they would be hurting because i died, i just couldn't do that to them. i started to just pray that everything will get better and i wanted to live so i can do all the things i wanted to do before i die, like get married, have kids, travel around the world and other stuff, so please re-think this. well, i wish u all the best and i hope everything gets better for u. good luck.


Re: Goodbye Forever Mom (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 06:26:08 PM AEST
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beautiful...


Re: Goodbye Forever Mom (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 06:26:59 PM AEST
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beautiful...


Re: Goodbye Forever Mom (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 06:36:35 PM AEST
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My dear, please do not "pick-up" where your Mother left off! Why should you give up your life....just because she's self destructing and wants to take you with her. There is an old saying..."Misery Loves Company!" She wants you to join her! Rise above it. If you can stand up to demons....it's really works...they stop abusing you when they find you will not allow it anymore. Please dear friend, I was abused and beaten all my life..Please go to my site and read "She Walks In Hatred" Also read "You're Not Worth Loving!" I was also abused my my former husband. But I got out alive and so can you!
I'm so sorry,
Warm Love and Hugs
Lovingcritters
Connie Sue
csz1914@msn.com




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