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Please Do n't
Contributed by
alisialynn
on
Friday, 25th July 2003 @ 10:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Don't touch me
I am poison to you
Please touch me
I am lonely for you
Don't touch me
I lie and lie and lie
Please touch me
I cry and cry and cry
Don't touch me
I don't want to hurt you
Please touch me
I do want to hurt you
Don't touch me
I don't know if i'll be able to stand it
Please touch me
I don't know if i can stop shacking like this
Don't touch me
You will burn now because my body is scorching hot
Please touch me
Put this fire out with your smooth cool hands
Self Indulgent. I let him touch me. He feels used now
Copyright ©
alisialynn
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2003-07-25 22:25:00]
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Re: Please Do n't
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by deadly_blaZe on
Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 03:36:31 AM AEST
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~sighs~ i just got in a huge fight with the guy i 'love'.. its amazing how i can hate evrything about him yet love him just as much... i loved this.. i didnt like the last line as much.. the 'self indulgent' thing
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Re: Please Do n't
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 10:46:53 AM AEST
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| i'm am without words, other than to say i burst into tears not even 10 lines into your poem. it's almost eerie, the way your writing seems to effect me. i obviously like it very much, and look forward to reading more of your work. painted_echos |
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