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Meet me at the Gates
Contributed by
Private
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Friday, 25th July 2003 @ 09:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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A soldier leaves to fight a war,
will he see her face once more?
his girl is left behind to wait,
but he's arrived at the gate.
"tell my girl 'im sorry dear'"
because you are there and i am here.
i have died and you remain,
i was a soldier but now im plain.
i am here at the pearly gate,
and right here is where ill wait.
ill wait to see you once again,
sorry theres nothing for your pain.
i am gone but ill see you soon,
darling please dont let the darkness loom.
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Re: Meet me at the Gates
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by LovingWhispers on
Friday, 25th July 2003 @ 10:22:44 PM AEST
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I love it when I am moved to tears by a poem.And I was certainly wiping tears while reading this write.I would have loved it to have been longer....maybe him reflecting on past times spent together...their love?..I dunno but all I know is I wanted more lol. *sniff*
More more more ;)
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Re: Meet me at the Gates
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 02:54:04 AM AEST
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Very touching write....really sad...
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Re: Meet me at the Gates
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by shelby on
Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 12:31:50 PM AEST
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ahhhh this touched me more than you know
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