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Stoned walk
Contributed by
vincy
on
Friday, 25th July 2003 @ 02:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The itch of longing
not to be scratched
as we wander on primary rocks
pondering our minds
with empty thought
doing ancient things with
archaic instinct
demanding peace without
archetypal struggle
but with a primal scream
we reach out longing still
within the language of stones
as we walk a lonely walk
searching for a place
where we will face
the choice of our making
come to rest
holding a small
ball
riddled with
hope
we can see
voices are falling
from our eyes
as we hear the silent cries
of forbidden angels
coming to rest
in our busom.
Copyright ©
vincy
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2003-07-25 14:35:00]
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Re: Stoned walk
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by Jacquelynne on
Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 01:41:03 AM AEST
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| hey, this poem makes you think...about what?...um...i'd rather not say....lol... |
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Re: Stoned walk
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by shelby on
Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 12:48:26 PM AEST
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thought provoking write I enjoyed this
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Re: Stoned walk
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by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Wednesday, 20th August 2003 @ 08:53:47 AM AEST
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What a great poem! Creative, flows well, and meaningfull.
riddled with
hope
we can see
voices are falling
from our eyes
as we hear the silent cries
of forbidden angels
coming to rest
in our busom.
What a powerful statement. This deserves publishment. Keep it up!
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