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Appreciation
Contributed by
Rbo
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Friday, 25th July 2003 @ 02:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Appreciation
Brings me into liberation
My adornment of you
The memories I値l keep
Inside all of me
Of the beauty you do
How long does it take
To appreciate
All of you?
Not long at all
If my mind doesn稚 fall
Into taking you for granted
But I値l not do that to you
I have a grand flavor
That I do and shall savor
There痴 no debate
Within my minds eye
I have dined
In the eye of my mind
With the best flavors
And the grandness of you
It is good to know your diversity
Filled with harmony
It wows me to see
How things can be
I知 in a labyrinth
Of blooming amazement
I知 not sure I want to get through
For each blossom
Is creating its own aroma
I realize that I知 not alone here
In this wonderful maze that blooms
Each one of you
Has somehow tickled my funny bone
I feel now more than ever
Closer to my home
I know I知 an odd one
Yet in a good way
But I must say
That I知 more thankful this day
And more in love
With each and everyone of you
I just wanted you to know that
And that I love and appreciate
All of you
Thank you
Ryan Brady O坦eilly
ｮ10/12/2001
Copyright ﾂｩ
Rbo
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2003-07-25 14:05:00]
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Re: Appreciation
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by Saira on
Friday, 25th July 2003 @ 06:18:27 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC Rbo!
This is a very lovely write. I really appreciate the love you showed for others. It's always good to love people. Good work!
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Re: Appreciation
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by Drew on
Friday, 25th July 2003 @ 07:08:43 PM AEST
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| I am having a hard time with the rythmn on this one?? |
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