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the song of my life
Contributed by
dreadfulsuicide1570
on
Thursday, 24th July 2003 @ 10:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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she walks to shcool with the lunch she packed
nobody knows what shes holding bakc
where the same dress she wore yesterday
she hides the bruises with linen and lace
o0h
the teacher wonders but never asks
its hard to see the pain behind the mask
bearing the burden of a secret storm
sometimes she wishes she was never born
through the wind and the rain
she stands hard as a stone
in a world tht she cant rise above
but her dreams give her wings
and she flys to a place
where she's loved
concrete angel
somebody cries in the middle of the nite
the neighbors hear but the turn out the light
a fragile soul caught in hands of fate
when morning comes it will be too late
through the wind and the rain
she stands hard as a stone
in a world tht she cant rise above
but her dreams give her wings
and she flys to a place
where she's loved
concrete angel
a statue stands in a shaded place
and angel girl with an upturn face
a name is written on a polished rock
a broken heart that the world forgot
through the wind and the rain
she stands hard as a stone
in a world tht she cant rise above
but her dreams give her wings
and she flys to a place
where she's loved
concrete angel
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Re: the song of my life
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by child_of_God on
Thursday, 24th July 2003 @ 10:35:42 PM AEST
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| wow. very beautiful, well said. |
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Re: the song of my life
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 24th July 2003 @ 10:54:06 PM AEST
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Exceedingly beautiful...but so, so sad.... touched me to the core... I do hope this is fictional..
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: the song of my life
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 25th July 2003 @ 12:24:57 AM AEST
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Oh, your poem broke my heart! What a wonderful theme. I was a battered child until I was a Senior in high school. I also had the thought of death.....it was my only way out! I hope and prayer this did not happen to you, but if it did, I'm so glad you are still alive to write that beautiful poem! It was wonderful
lovingcritters
Connie Sue
I just posted two poems today on my abuse as a child and a wife. Go read.....mine are true, i hope yours is not! |
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Re: the song of my life
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 25th July 2003 @ 05:50:48 AM AEST
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very well written and heartbreaking...it is so sad that this happens and nobody tries to stop it
Shari |
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