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do you mind ?
Contributed by
cant-skate
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Thursday, 24th July 2003 @ 09:45:00 PM in AEST
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oops
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Do you mind if
Our first date was on the moon?
Where eyes are the wife
And tears are the spouse
Do you mind if
I looked at you without saying a word?
Sometimes silence can mean
Thousands of words
Do you mind taking my hand
As your only bed?
And having my lips
For your daily bread?
Do you mind for the future
Sharing good and bad?
And having our baby
On the second bed?
Answer once again! Do you want me to be your man?
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2003-07-24 21:45:00]
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Re: do you mind ?
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 24th July 2003 @ 10:18:57 PM AEST
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very original
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Re: do you mind ?
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 25th July 2003 @ 12:37:14 AM AEST
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The timing was just right. But brings to mind of being a poor man's slave? But your poem has convinced me with that much love, who needs food?
Loving read, Indeed!
lovingcritters
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