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Cupcake
Contributed by
ShadowsCloud
on
Thursday, 24th July 2003 @ 09:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Cupcake
Cupcake, is what you called me
And I'd wonder why you liked me
In the begining it was annoying
But soon it became endearing
At first I thought you were being a jerk
At times; at my side you seemed to lurk
Then one day you asked me out
I said yes with very little doubt
Dinner and a movie; what fun we had
This date with you made me so glad
You truly were one of the "bad boys"
Being with you brought me such joy
Throgh it all you called me, Cupcake
Hearing your deep voice made my insides quake
We broke up because I moved away
I hope to see you again some day
I loved you very dearly, Wess
As a boyfriend you were the best
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ShadowsCloud
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2003-07-24 21:25:00]
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Re: Cupcake
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 24th July 2003 @ 10:21:28 PM AEST
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very nice write
Shari |
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Re: Cupcake
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by child_of_God on
Thursday, 24th July 2003 @ 10:38:13 PM AEST
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| very picturesque and well said. like im an authority or something. well there's my comment. :) |
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Re: Cupcake
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 25th July 2003 @ 12:42:53 AM AEST
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Find him quick! Then send him this poem. He probably doesn't even know you liked him that much!
You poem had what I call "light feet" that just danced tippy toe into my soul! I really enjoyed that. I could see it happening to!
Don't wait now....before it's too late! Go to Classmates on line and look him up!
Loving critters
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Re: Cupcake
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by Trisha on
Friday, 25th July 2003 @ 12:42:12 PM AEST
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| candice i like this and look for him if you want |
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