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Then

Contributed by Red_Silo on Thursday, 24th July 2003 @ 11:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

I’m coming undone now,
And I was falling forever then.
If only you knew who and what I’ve seen.
Just know I never was and never will be what you saw in me, then.

I know you wanted,
And I know you condescended upon me.
But what you cannot see,
Is only how I watched over you ever so silently.

I linger in the doorway of the story,
A story that may have no end.
But what is the point, when the pages speak of only fire and sin.

I would sit inside myself for hours,
Just to be a spirit watching over us two,
You don’t remember me, but I can remember you.

There are so many things alum that blacken the path inside.
Don’t try to fix me now,
Because I’m your only light.

I love you,
It’s what’s all is left of yesterday.
You may not remember me now, but him,
But I know that you loved me then.

Copyright Â© Red_Silo ... [ 2003-07-24 11:05:00]
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Re: Then (User Rating: 1 )
by ArdRi79 on Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 07:10:29 AM AEST
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This really moved me, I relate I guess I like the way you started each verse with I then on the broke that in the second last verse and returned with the I love you, it made a real impact.

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