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Sand Castles
Contributed by
Feelin_Like_A_Sadfellow
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Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 10:05:00 PM in AEST
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Spending too much time, building these sand castles
By the waves
Only to be brought down, by relentless waves
All the time
The summer air deceives you, leaving you in high spirits
Only to be toppled down, by dark clouds
Fearless hands take to the sands, try to rebuild what has passed
Losing all faith to the waves, taken to the sea
The warm breeze builds you up, feeding you lies over truth
Leaving you thirsting for honesty, with little hope
Think I’ll spend some more time, rebuilding my sand castle
Try to keep the faith, hope for some brighter days
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Re: Sand Castles
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 24th July 2003 @ 12:37:18 AM AEST
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Great idea! Me too!Good poetry.
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Re: Sand Castles
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by karoody on
Thursday, 24th July 2003 @ 04:26:09 AM AEST
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a beautiful write, great metaphor...i hope you always have this hope...thanx for sharing this one....you are wonderful...
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Re: Sand Castles
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by shelby on
Thursday, 24th July 2003 @ 11:32:33 AM AEST
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this is beautiful keep building those sand castles!! thanks for bringing the ocean into my desert today.
lovely.
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Re: Sand Castles
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 9th August 2003 @ 12:24:57 AM AEST
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| life, what else can we do? i build sand castles too, indeed i am much like you, rerenovating my life; from tides passing through, hugs n' love nessa |
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