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Blackout
Contributed by
stonedraider23
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Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 03:05:00 PM in AEST
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Darkness falls leaving you alone
Surrounding you with emptyness
You panic and turn to stone
Trying to cope with your sudden blindness
You scramble for a light
Afraid of what awaits
Sounds coming from left and right
Your heart races towards its fate
You sit and wait alone and afraid
Nothing in sight
Oh what a delight
The power is back
To you i say Goodnight
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2003-07-23 15:05:00]
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Re: Blackout
(User Rating: 1 )
by apollo on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 12:23:45 PM AEST
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| nice poem, i enjoyed it, i liked how it flowed well. |
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Re: Blackout
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 09:33:47 PM AEST
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| Yea ima retard. what is that supposed to be? that description distracted me from the rest of your poem because im trying to find some reason why you would say such a thing. this is a fantastic poem nontheless. |
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