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Leave me ALONE!
Contributed by
Desi
on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 02:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I'm different from you, yes I know.
Don't try to change me or fix me,
For I'm not broken,
I'm just me.
If you can't accept it, tough.
Just let me know,
And I'll go.
I don't have to stand here,
I don't have to listen to this,
So just shut up,
Leave me ALONE!
Copyright ©
Desi
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2003-07-23 14:35:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Leave me ALONE!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 05:30:25 PM AEST (User
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Whew!Harsh words,I must say.
But I read it anyway. And yes,you're fine just
the way you are! Nicely done!
Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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Re: Leave me ALONE!
(User Rating: 1 ) by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 07:07:15 PM AEST (User
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Hehehe I LOVE this! Sounded like something Avril Lavigne would say as soon as I got to the line "Just let me know, And I'll go." The line from Nobody's Fool. I just love the attitude! Great write!
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Leave me ALONE!
(User Rating: 1 ) by vincy on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 09:07:24 PM AEST (User
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This expression is direct, honest, emotional,
but the situation is a familiar one, prejudice and all,
the word here is: "enough's enough!, be and let be." |
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Re: Leave me ALONE!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 10:01:19 PM AEST (User
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strong write
Shari |
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Re: Leave me ALONE!
(User Rating: 1 ) by FunkyMonkeyMania on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 06:28:18 PM AEST (User
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*laughs hysterically* U GOT COMPARED TO AVRIL LAVIGNE!!!!!!!!!!! O GOOD GRACIOUS, THATS A GOOD ONE!!! whew. sorry, i really do like ur poem, snez, and i promise ill never liken it to avril lavigne. love emily |
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Re: Leave me ALONE!
(User Rating: 1 ) by FunkyMonkeyMania on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 06:30:59 PM AEST (User
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HAHAH, UR POEM GOT COMPARED TO AVRIL LAVIGNE. OO, THATS A GOOD ONE!!!!! *LAUGHS HYSTERICALLY* whew. i really did like ur poem, snez, and i promise ill never liken it to avril lavigne!! love emily |
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