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One Last Night
Contributed by
Patricia_Petro
on
Friday, 9th August 2002 @ 08:02:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Be still take care my bleeding heart
the end is near in sight.
The letting go of hopes and dreams
will come this final night.
One last release of salty tears
will wash away the pain.
No more will I relive the past
nor think what might-have-been.
No wishing for his kiss or touch
or him to long for mine.
No more the prayer for his return
nor back the hands of time.
I'll find within myself the strength
and share with those I love
the peace I carry deep inside
God's blessing from above.
I know that though he loved me not,
another will and then
I'll soar up high on angel wings
free to fly again.
This man who brought me utter joy
I loved with all my soul.
And though my heart will not forget,
tonight I let him go.
Copyright ©
Patricia_Petro
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2002-08-09 20:02:57]
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Re: One Last Night
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by chatabox on
Saturday, 10th August 2002 @ 05:50:12 AM AEST
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awww, not sure if this is fiction or not but if its true then glad to see you are moving on with your life.
Lovely lovely poem. |
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Re: One Last Night
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by Chrissie on
Saturday, 10th August 2002 @ 06:35:22 AM AEST
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Oh Patricia, I really love this poem. It's beautiful in every way and has reduced me to tears.
Chrissie x |
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Re: One Last Night
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by markymark on
Saturday, 10th August 2002 @ 07:02:37 AM AEST
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| sad and beutiful and full of emotion, great writing...hope all works out for you...Mark x |
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Re: One Last Night
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by Suzy on
Saturday, 10th August 2002 @ 07:56:44 AM AEST
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Patricia this is a wonderful poem...it's sad and beautiful at the same time...
Lasca |
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Re: One Last Night
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by humphdj on
Saturday, 10th August 2002 @ 07:35:33 PM AEST
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I loved this too.
It's hard to free the one you love, for in your heart they stay.
Great write Patricia
Rgds
Dave |
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