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Love to Love her

Contributed by isaiyan on Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 08:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

we all live in this mess.
But she didn't decide to live her life.
But for what it's worth, she tried her best.
Leading her out to failure and watching her die.

Now, Forever. She's too young
Too young to know this pain.
Carving a gaping hole inside.
Feels so beautiful to her.

She hides her pain in cigarrettes.
She knows nothing of tomorrow but she
knows what she hasn't done yet.
Crumpled and starving and crying and you're watching her die.

Feed the flames of her death.
Watch her burn in all your pain.
Feeding her to your hate.
Feels soo beautiful to her, please love her.......don't hurt her.

And you thought she had died?
Instead she kept it all inside.

Look at what we've done.
We've destroyed her endless but beautiful life.
The battle against her is done.
Did it feel rewarding to watch her soul die?

Spread her ashes around.
Forget her for her life was a big mistake.
Spread all the blame around.
Why didn't you love her? Why wouldn't you love her?

Why don't you love her?
Why won't you love her?

Copyright © isaiyan ... [ 2003-07-23 08:35:00]
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Re: Love to Love her (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 12:58:35 PM AEST
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well written but so very sad.
michelle

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