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i have to tell you somthing....
Contributed by
jackhammer
on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 04:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The lie i am carries you
through my sky.
But you are blind.
Ahead i see your sadness
But here and now,
i cherish you.
No warning will i give you
I know you'll leave.
And the cloud starts to form
in a crucifiction shape.
Just like the disgrace that
i hang from.
And as i take you ahead
into the storm
you open your eyes.
My head bleeds as you fall
from my arms
and the rain falls onto
my skin.
I pray that the nails
be burnt from my arms,
so maybe one day
i can hold you again.
Copyright ©
jackhammer
... [
2003-07-23 04:05:00]
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Re: i have to tell you somthing....
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by LovingWhispers on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 06:18:32 AM AEST
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| WOW!! I loved every line. |
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Re: i have to tell you somthing....
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by 0o_Jelly_Bean_o0 on
Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 08:47:32 PM AEST
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| And you said I had talent... Very good I hope I see more of these works of art coming soon... |
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Re: i have to tell you somthing....
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by DreamWeaver on
Friday, 1st August 2003 @ 03:08:52 AM AEST
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| I've read this so many times ... it cuts so deep ... an extremely good write .. Jan |
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