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enough to kill
Contributed by
hardcoreputa
on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 10:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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You convinced me that I was the problem,
And for years I have tried,
Tried to kill myself to set things right.
But now I see that I wasn’t born with hate,
I was to be molded in you image,
And now I see what a dreadful image that is.
After years of hating you,
I have forgotten how to love,
And worse, I am afraid to be loved.
I push people out of my life
-Because of you-
I tried not to let it happen,
But I grew more like you each day.
Removing myself from the world I once loved,
-But you haven’t completely corrupted me yet,
They say there’s hope, I can change.
And you could too… if you tried,
But you don’t see the problem,
And so to help myself,
I'm taking one thing from you.
You never gave to me,
And this I need, you owe this to me.
-I'm taking your life-
I'm not sure how yet, but I will kill you.
You taught me to hate,
I owe this murderous rage to you,
So thank you for making me despise you enough to kill.
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2003-07-22 22:05:00]
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Re: enough to kill
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by wyrd_faerie on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 10:20:02 AM AEST
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| wow...i love this...if you need to talk about it then you know where i am :) very good poem... |
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Re: enough to kill
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by Wrybod on
Thursday, 31st July 2003 @ 02:58:22 AM AEST
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| We "humans" have spent the last century killing eachother by the millions. It doesn't achiece anything |
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Re: enough to kill
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by Wrybod on
Thursday, 31st July 2003 @ 03:01:49 AM AEST
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| We "humans" have spent the last century killing eachother by the millions. It doesn't achieve anything |
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Re: enough to kill
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by Cancer on
Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 12:59:00 PM AEST
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i loved this. i too was terrified of turning out like my dad, but after i moved out, i saw that my mom was just a lying ***** who made him seem like a monster. your poem was dripping with an emotion that everyone needs to accept and embrace. homicidal rage. i hope that things work out best for you, whether you have to destroy them, or ignore them.
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