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Contributed by
Jilly
on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 03:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I slept.
You were mine in my dream
I awoke.
You were standing in my room
Doors left unlocked
You enter while I sleep.
Heart left open wide…
Waiting for your entrance.
Choose your entry…
You will be welcome….
Copyright ©
Jilly
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2003-07-22 15:35:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Entries
(User Rating: 1 ) by vincy on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 04:50:02 PM AEST (User
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I love it, only I implore further indulgence,
not from the meaning but the verse could take more,
this poem would be enhanced by appropriate expansion.
My poem 'just like that' is such an example. |
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Re: Entries
(User Rating: 1 ) by Fiona on
Wednesday, 6th August 2003 @ 05:44:02 AM AEST (User
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me likes me likes...another good poem...
damn u...haha |
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