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Night Flower
Contributed by
pl_rage
on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 03:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The sun sets over the lush meadow
One lone flower now gently stirs
Awakened by the first touch of night
Carefully it unfolds its graceful petals
Laying bare the heart only to darkness
Too delicate to face the sun’s radiance
The flower now stands untouched in full bloom
Revealing a grandeur seen once in a blue moon
Still this shy beauty remains undiscovered
Kept company only by the howling wind
It curls up again at the first hint of dawn
Holding only gloom in its quiet embrace
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2003-07-22 15:05:00]
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Re: Night Flower
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 03:35:02 PM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful!! Miss your work...
Jenni |
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Re: Night Flower
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by cant-skate on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 04:56:59 PM AEST
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| Good work |
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Re: Night Flower
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by krystal on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 03:56:44 AM AEST
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| Truly lovely ...excellent write and throughly enjoyed...krystal |
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Re: Night Flower
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by tease_whizz on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 01:27:44 PM AEST
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| beautiful imagery and language that is pleasant to both the mind and the eye. an excellent write and a unique concept, keep writing, Kate x |
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Re: Night Flower
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by vincy on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 01:48:42 PM AEST
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'A sleepless night is worth
a hundred years of dreaming'
hey, a lovely poem,
the dark side of life
sometimes is the real thing
relative to circumstances. |
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