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Johnny
Contributed by
squeesh
on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 11:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Thought he was cool
Thought he’d succeed
Tried everything
But failed in the end
Always appearing happy
But sulking inside
He didn’t want it to end like this
But everything ended in tears
With the gun pointed
And the door locked
The noise sounded
And the body fell to the floor
He died that night
So he left
With all the fright
Copyright ©
squeesh
... [
2003-07-22 11:35:00]
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Re: Johnny
(User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 11:15:25 PM AEST
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| sounds like my friend mark |
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Re: Johnny
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by sugar0986 on
Friday, 26th September 2003 @ 08:10:38 PM AEST
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| That's really sad. But anyways I liked you poem it was good. |
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