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IF
Contributed by
Aika
on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 09:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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If I were a mountain stream
I would like to be clear
I would enjoy if you bathed in me
I would be happy if you drunk me
If I were grass and flowers in the meadow
I would be your bed and pillow
I would lovely smell
And you could rest well
If I were a horse
I would let you see the world
From my back
I would take you wherever and safe...
If I were the sea
I would protect your ship
If I were the cloud
I would rain on you good mood
And IF I were your mouth
I would make you laugh.
Lovely dreams
And night sweet
Copyright ©
Aika
... [
2003-07-22 09:05:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: IF
(User Rating: 1 ) by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 11:47:07 PM AEST (User
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Oh Aika,
I just loved that poem. You have a special gift and I'm so glad you are sharing it with us all!
Well, written, and especially since you language is not English. You did a really fine job.
Keep them coming, they are lovely.
lovingcritters
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