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He found the girl of his dream

Contributed by Aika on Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 09:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



He found the girl of his dream,
She was like the sun, she was supreme
He did not see her face or eyes
But seemed, that the girl flies
Every their meeting on net
She touched his heart and his head
She came throughout all his flesh
And he always felt so fine , so fresh

First he knew were her words and her voice
Then wanted to know more and again recovered his poise

She found the boy of her life
He was mysterious and did not fly
She did not know his face nor eyes
But loved his kind words and supposed he smiles
Then his voice and appearance
Took her heart and sense

They were drowning in their eyes
So plentiful were their flights
They were on the cloud nine and also the seventh sky
Wanted to explore love borders and fly
Helding each other in arms and their mind
And did not matter in real they are still apart

They both fell in a huge huge love
And only the sky was stronger and was above
Wanted to touch each other and be together
To hug and kiss and walk and nothing seemed to be better
But both lived so far on the opposite side of the globe
And was not easy to take flight, so they hoped....

Both started to work so hard hard
To save enough money for their real flight
Finally they met in the country of no net
On the isle of nobody and only they were there
They knew they´ll never separate even they´re alive or dead

Their dream came true
They were satisfied and so full
Full of love and experience, smiles and talks
Spending days together and for walks

When the day of their death came
He asked her how to spend it , what she wants to get
She told him only one:
Take my hand and let us again fly
Her hands in his, her head on his lap
He talked to her the whole night and then
Reminding their long long deep love
And again.... there was nothing more – only the sky above.
Suddenly the isle dived into the silence
Their souls flew together to sky to dance
And, two shining stars are now, up there
Everybody watch them and greet the lovers of this sphere.....
Never separated – or alive or dead
Do not cry for them, smile and know ,that
Love is more than you believe
And contentendly they together lived.





Copyright © Aika ... [ 2003-07-22 09:05:00]
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Re: He found the girl of his dream (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 11:57:52 PM AEST
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Is so beautiful, Aika. They both found a love beyong words....your words made that quite clear! What a wonderful poet you are, Aika. And now my friend too!
Don't stop writing they are wonderful my friend
lovingcritters
Connie Sue
The next time you write a poem, Aika....please send it to me, and I will translate your English so that it rhymes before you post it OK?


Re: He found the girl of his dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Hiddendarkness1705 on Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 03:04:03 PM AEST
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This is nothing that I have ever read before, i loved it..great write
~stacie~




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