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i'm over
Contributed by
tinka_belle
on
Monday, 21st July 2003 @ 01:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I’m over believing your promises
I cant handle it anymore
Getting my hopes up
Then having them shattered
Over and over again
I’m over you being sick all the time
And not paying attention
To me
Anymore
I remember when you used to
Be all over me
All the time
When your kisses
Used to be powerful
And like you couldn’t get
Enough of me
When we made love
And were close
I remember feeling like
You were too
Touchy feely
But loving it more
And feeling more
Special
And amazing
And beautiful
Than ever before
I remember when you
Loved me by showing me
Your kisses
Your touch
But now
Your kisses feel like you don’t mean them
And are a chore
And we don’t make love
Or have sex
And I cant feel
Close to you
Now you never seem to touch me
And your excuses are endless
You’re tired
You’re sick
You’re stressed
And now
You only tell me you love me
And well
You still show me you love me
But only by buying me
“things”
the latest
“thing”
being a bunch of flowers
flowers die
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tinka_belle
... [
2003-07-21 01:05:00]
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Re: i'm over
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by Jackhammer on
Monday, 21st July 2003 @ 02:45:21 AM AEST
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| i really liked this.I feel bad for you.You sound like you love this person alot.Have you showed them this poem? |
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Re: i'm over
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by Trisha on
Monday, 21st July 2003 @ 02:45:31 AM AEST
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| I Love This One And I Want This One To Be The Top Ten |
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Re: i'm over
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by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 06:20:11 AM AEST
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Wow... that last line is so effective! Great write.
~ Moonlit |
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Re: i'm over
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 22nd July 2003 @ 09:28:55 AM AEST
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this is so sad. yopur emotions ran through this entire poem
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